Thursday 25 August 2016

Persuasive Writing

Friday 26th August 2016
This week Room 10 has been doing persuasive writing. The topic is about is it okay to be different (Agree or Disagree). I agreed that it IS okay to be different. Here is my persuasive writing about how it is okay to be different.
It is okay to be different
Statement:Is it okay to be different
Introduction:In my point of view, I think that it is okay to be different no matter who you are.Why is it okay to be different?

Reason #1:The reason why? I think that it is okay to be different because if everyone was same, life would be very boring but being different makes you feel unique. For example if every person in this world would be the same, how would you know which one is which. Also if every one had a bad attitude, the world wouldn't be a better place. When you are different you can do anything differently than the way others do it. When you are all the same, you wouldn't know how to do things differently. Furthermore if people was the same, they wouldn't be able to do anything that is challenging in your life. Instead it would  just be the same old days going past each year.

Reason #2:Another reason why?  I am sure that being different makes you feel special in all different ways. By being the same as others, you would feel like you are invisible to people and life won't be fun. If you had friends and you are all the same, it would be like you are talking to yourself because you are all saying the exact same things. Also if you want to play some friendly sports with your friends, it wouldn't be fun, You want to know why? When you are all the same, you would know what the other person would be thinking. But when everyone is different, everyone is unique and you wouldn't know what will happen. It would be better being different and also having fun instead of being the same to everyone and also lying around being bored.

Reason #3:From what I can see, being different means being special because when you are different you will be noticed for your attitude and for who you are. For example if you are all the same, will be noticed for who you are? I think that you won’t because when you are the same, people won’t notice you because they will get you mixed up with other people surrounding you. That is why I strongly believe that being different isn't such a bad thing. But being the same would be annoying because their will be no adventures to your life. Also if everyone had been eating unhealthy food in the the world, you would be in a bad place to leave in because everyone would be very lazy to exercise. So that means it would be very unhealthy to your body.

Restating Opinion:I strongly believe that being different is okay and it also makes you feel special. Being unique isn't a bad thing because you will noticed by all the things you do others especially being a role model to the little kids surrounding us.  

Thank You
I hope you liked my persuasive writing.
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